deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

More from ~Lacewinged-Beauty


×

Undone from sea-moorings,
I float.

The sea has bid me barren, an
island with no anchor.

Bleak and pale I drift,
to and fro.

Gentle giants nudge me,
their fins propellers – spurring
me on.

Sailors cry out, their
voices lost amid deep thoughts and
deeper dreams.

I drift, an island set
free too soon.

Anchorless, I ride storms and waves;
the way children ride ponies.

Torn from my harbour,
I sail.

687

44 72 29
Download HTML download, 653 bytes

Oceane: Wildly popular French name meaning ocean, which could easily cross the sea. Female.


-

People say I don't feel - that there is no capacity for it because of all I have set aside and to their knowledge, forgotten.
They are wrong - I do feel, but I do not forget. My life may be a complete mess, but I have some semblance of organisation in my memories and the experiences I have earnt - whether they came through bullying, false love or strong hatred. That is enough.
So to those who believe I will fall apart in a light wind, I say this - You know nothing of me, you can unchain my anchor but I will come home.

-

Edit: Comma after Anchorless, comma ending same line changed to semi colon.

Details

Stats

Submitted on
September 19, 2012
File Size
653 bytes
Views
687
Favourites
44 (who?)
Comments
72
Downloads
29
URL
Thumb
Only verified accounts can report policy violations. Please check your email and click on the verification link.
* Required field
Add a Comment:
 
love 2 2 joy 1 1 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconadrolyn:
Mood: Wow! *Adrolyn Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not sure which is stronger, the poem, or the artist's comments beneath it.
Reply
:iconlacewinged-beauty:

Thank you (for the favourite too).
Reply
:iconconcora:
*Concora Jan 31, 2013   Writer
Glad to see this get a DLD - congratulations! :heart:
Reply
:iconlacewinged-beauty:

Thank you :blush:
It was completely unexpected.
Reply
:iconsammur-amat:
=Sammur-amat Jan 30, 2013   General Artist
Congratulations on the DLD, you lovely, lovely girl <3
Reply
:iconlacewinged-beauty:

Thank you so much :blush:
Reply
:iconsammur-amat:
=Sammur-amat Feb 1, 2013   General Artist
:blowkiss:
Reply
:iconsammur-amat:
=Sammur-amat Feb 3, 2013   General Artist
<3
Reply
:iconiyraemm:
~IyraEMM Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this part:

Sailors cry out, their
voices lost amid deep thoughts and
deeper dreams.


This is lovely, congrats on your DLD. :)
Reply
Add a Comment: